100 Word Story - The Tunnel

In Te Ngahere some of us have been doing some 100 word story's. This is my first 100 word story I have wrote. We picked an appropriate picture and started writing about it. We made sure we kept the mood and atmosphere all throughout the story. I decided to pick a picture from Pobble. If you want, can you please comment how you liked my 100 word story. My 100 word story is called 

'The Tunnel'.

Here is my 100 word story: Hope you like it!

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The Tunnel

She had been tracking the lost deer for around just over an hour. She had followed the trail of broken twigs and leaves the deer had nibbled on. Creeping slowly and quietly, not even making the slightest sound, she remained undetected. She stumbled across the mysterious circles in a clearing in the forest. The deer enters the first mysterious circle fiercely and vanishes, completely vanishes. Not even the leaf the deer was nibbling on was left. She stopped with shock and fascination, her face looked numb and she looked ice-cold. Feeling anxious, she steps into the mysterious circle and then...

Ka Kite!